Johnlock - Little light of love

First of all FABULOUS JOB! I love it! It's captivating and it's has a clear point of interest!

For the piece as a whole it's very well done the colours complement each other, they fade well together, and they look like they belong there. And the fact you have used more than one media is great! Adding the extra bit of colour, detail, and texture with the Faber castel pencils brings more depth to the piece.

For your lines they look amazing! Especially in the background the varying line weight adds more interest and really gives the piece a "Feeling". However with this particular piece the main character with the light hair has lines that seem to get thicker as they move away from the center; which is awesome but the thick lines of the ear take away the softness that the character has. The ear is also in the same area as the main focus (the Dark-haired character's gaze) which can draw the audience's eyes and attention away from what's important.

Anatomy is extremely important too! Your hands are simply amazing and I love how the beings in the background have hands that almost describe how creepy they are with their long nails and scrawny fingers. The Dark-haired main character here, although most things look in place, with the position he is in his hips should be more to the right and turned towards the Light-haired character for a more "natural" pose. Same kind of minor things with the Light-haired character. His wings/the middle of his back are tilted towards us but his right shoulder is back and almost facing "us". Which looks a little un-natural. A way to create a smoother position would be to either take his right wing and give it a sharper angle from his back and pointing it to the left a little more while moving the left wing back more. OR simply pushing the shoulder forward towards the Dark-haired character a little more. (I could be wrong about this one seeing is a can't actually see where the character's shoulder is because of the fabric's folds. If his shoulder is indeed more forward then maybe define where the shoulder is under his shirt by adding some extra shadows.)

Of course this is ONLY a Critique so take from it what you will and leave whatever you don't like or agree with. I hope I was clear enough with my description and I can't wait to see your next art piece!